Thursday, June 30, 2022
Ki-O-Rahi tornement
Tuesday, June 28, 2022
Litera Language
Knowlege Of Text Type
Tuesday, June 21, 2022
Scince
Jonah Gets Angry For Gods Forgiveness
Your assignment is to research "forgiving", in the bible and share what you learned. You will need to use reference material such as biblegateway.com or search engines to locate stories of forgiveness in the Bible.
How did I go ⚫ ✅ ✅✅ ✅✅✅ | My self-assessment |
I can use reference material to locate starting points (bible stories) relevant to forgiveness | ✅✅ |
I can create a framework to record my key ideas and notes | ⚫ |
I can read the bible independently | ✅✅✅ |
I can use my notes to write about what I learned about forgiveness | ✅✅ |
Teacher comment |
Sunday, June 19, 2022
Caught In A Rip
There were two brothers who were not at all alike;they were different in every way. The younger brother stayed on the sand and the older brother was always in the water. The older brother liked to swim with his bros, diving, tumbling, bomb, snorkel, and surf in the waves. During the day the older brother liked to go on lots of action adventures but the younger brother would stay safe on the sand. Sometimes the older brother would creep up on the
younger brother and drag him into the water. “Oh come on you little chicken,it’s only waves,” teased the older brother.
One morning their mother got angry with them,“ like a cat and a mouse!”out you go together,’’ she said, and try be nice to each other just for once’,Jack is out swimming bombing and having fun while james is playing on the sand. jack tells james to come out for a swim because it is hot. James looks at the waves and thinks there to big for him to handle. ‘’James get in haer you little baby or i will drag you in’’ said Jack‘’James said no i will not leave this sand bank’’.Jack goes out to far then he gets caught in a rip and get pulled out over 50 meters away from shore.
His brother waited for him to come back from the water. Fear gripped his heart tears tethering to burst from his eyes.Knowing his brother might not come back James jumps in the water to go follow jack, knowing there were jellyfish, stingrays and sharks but he was determent to save or see where his brother is. As James was swimming out to jack, he saw a fin behind jack. James started to yell’’ shark! Shark! Behind you’’ swim to me, Jack said’’ you swim to me the currant is to strong’’.OK! Then he swims to him and they swim together slow and steady knowing there was shark behind them. They made it to the sand bank thanking james for saving him.
They ran through the sand, down the road and thourgh the door. When they reached home, their mom was washing the dishes.’’ Hello,’’ she said, ’’ you two seem very quiet.‘’ is everything alright?’’ Jack smiled at his brother. James smiled back.
New Ending
In class, we have been reading a story about thirst, our task was to make up our own ending of the story
I think I have down the following well
somethings I need to work on are 2A sentences and boys' sentences